It was a bright cold day in April. The clocks were striking thirteen. Winston Smith had his chin nuzzled into his breast. Winston Smith did this in an effort to escape the vile wind. He slipped quickly through the glass doors of Victory Mansions. Winston wasn’t quick enough to prevent a swirl of wind of gritty dust from entering along with him.
How do I develop my writing?
Looking at past work I noticed that I use complex sentences frequently, which become quite overwhelming for the reader. By introducing subordinate and relative clauses to create more direct context.